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![[parent]](https://images.physicslibrary.org/images/uparrow.png) Viewing Correction to 'fermion'
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capitalization, italicization, classification, grammar, spelling by Wkbj79
Correction id: 28
Filed on: 2007-06-29 03:43:12
Status: Accepted on 2009-01-30 19:23:06
Type: Meta/Minor
Correction text:
Please use lower case for the title.
Please italicize the first word within this entry.
This entry is currently not classified.
There should be a comma before Enrico Fermi.
Does "Leptons" need to be capitalized?
I would recommend adding a comma in the list: "Leptons, quarks, and baryons". The sentence is difficult to parse otherwise.
Please add a comma in the first sentence of the second paragraph:
"Since fermions have half-integer spin, they..."
In the same sentence, you currently have "constitues". This should be "constitutes" instead.
In the third paragraph, "know" should be "known" instead. Also, this sentence is difficult to parse, most likely because the ands are close together in the same sentence. Could you separate this sentence into two sentences?
The phrase "just like it's the case with" reads awkwardly. Please replace this with something like "just as" or "similar to". |
Comment from object owner vip6:
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